tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post1603488447378910240..comments2023-06-25T10:05:37.216-04:00Comments on Random Babble: Tantelizing Tuesday Teaser #4 - Forbidden Encounter (The girl in this story is a young adult.)Leann Mitchellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-14764937613052396712012-06-01T16:51:08.564-04:002012-06-01T16:51:08.564-04:00Ewwwww incest! Very interesting post.Ewwwww incest! Very interesting post.Bonni S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05568233942886562005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-69540491370618331262012-05-30T22:58:31.756-04:002012-05-30T22:58:31.756-04:00Thank you Benjamin. It was definitely controversy ...Thank you Benjamin. It was definitely controversy I was going for. I appreciate the feedback.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-22411738633199445962012-05-30T22:54:02.334-04:002012-05-30T22:54:02.334-04:00Thank you. I thought I'd go for disturbing thi...Thank you. I thought I'd go for disturbing this time round.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-59065059196408489862012-05-30T16:24:59.829-04:002012-05-30T16:24:59.829-04:00Well, oh wow - this is an out there post. If contr...Well, oh wow - this is an out there post. If controversy was the objective, then mission accomplished. The picture is hot and the writing is sizzling, but the characters - Hmmm. <br /><br />I agree with ER, you've got a big pair of balls and I applaud your creativity, if not your choice of taboo subjects.Benjamin T. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12804675835177034017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-17326429953510573602012-05-30T04:54:31.335-04:002012-05-30T04:54:31.335-04:00Very brave but really well written. Congratulation...Very brave but really well written. CongratulationsJulian Sponghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-86948646338571529612012-05-30T02:54:03.862-04:002012-05-30T02:54:03.862-04:00Thank you Cyril.Thank you Cyril.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-81546625546755643302012-05-29T20:10:33.299-04:002012-05-29T20:10:33.299-04:00Shocking piece! Well done.Shocking piece! Well done.Author Cyril J. Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08121700729761013966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-16800057247457592012-05-29T19:01:36.048-04:002012-05-29T19:01:36.048-04:00Thank you Venus! It strikes a cord with me as well...Thank you Venus! It strikes a cord with me as well, as I have been taken advantage of by a family member before. It was horrible. Writing is very therapeutic. Of course, this story is complete fiction and does not mimic my personal experience.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-7404273239287528652012-05-29T18:42:01.568-04:002012-05-29T18:42:01.568-04:00My first response was total disgust, at the conten...My first response was total disgust, at the content not the writing.<br />Very well-written piece but definitely not to my taste :-)VenusBookluvrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03834883038862865680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-12294645414067179852012-05-29T18:21:34.589-04:002012-05-29T18:21:34.589-04:00Thank you Havan. I am glad I was able to cause a s...Thank you Havan. I am glad I was able to cause a stir in emotions.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-82185490316602872882012-05-29T18:20:56.329-04:002012-05-29T18:20:56.329-04:00Thank you Molly. I really tried to cause controver...Thank you Molly. I really tried to cause controversy here.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-37710970155316084062012-05-29T18:19:56.175-04:002012-05-29T18:19:56.175-04:00Thank you Don.Thank you Don.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-77785092088023998572012-05-29T18:19:39.680-04:002012-05-29T18:19:39.680-04:00Thank you Ray. I am glad you enjoyed it.Thank you Ray. I am glad you enjoyed it.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-31096249966236424972012-05-29T18:19:17.344-04:002012-05-29T18:19:17.344-04:00Thank you Gemma. Of course, the point was not if s...Thank you Gemma. Of course, the point was not if she was old enough or not. Incest is wrong no matter how you look at it. That is why I wrote the peice. It is disturbing and stirs emotions. I am glad it did that.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-44331101918654395082012-05-29T18:16:59.130-04:002012-05-29T18:16:59.130-04:00Thank you Naomi.Thank you Naomi.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-72681789653380224732012-05-29T18:16:38.512-04:002012-05-29T18:16:38.512-04:00Don't apologize ER. My intent was to shock. Yo...Don't apologize ER. My intent was to shock. Your response tells me I did my job. Thank you.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-73149823693772570372012-05-29T15:46:38.406-04:002012-05-29T15:46:38.406-04:00I'm really unsure how I'd like to comment ...I'm really unsure how I'd like to comment on this piece, Leann. On one hand, I admire your cojones for writing a controversial piece. But my other hand is (insert many words here) with the content. I'm sorry!ER Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16856700822557692006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-11187764203896175772012-05-29T15:17:25.855-04:002012-05-29T15:17:25.855-04:00Bloody hell! That was super hot! Great teaser Lean...Bloody hell! That was super hot! Great teaser Leann.Don Abdulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05412998446272616942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-18231224029495793272012-05-29T15:11:03.852-04:002012-05-29T15:11:03.852-04:00Damn, what a hot piece! Even the picture had me so...Damn, what a hot piece! Even the picture had me sold!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-60969897983347685322012-05-29T14:04:54.142-04:002012-05-29T14:04:54.142-04:00I got the shock factor. I'm glad she was an ad...I got the shock factor. I'm glad she was an adult.Naomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-13336550016973402342012-05-29T13:59:47.099-04:002012-05-29T13:59:47.099-04:00Yes, l agree with the others, l felt uncomfortable...Yes, l agree with the others, l felt uncomfortable reading it as it wasn't clear she was old enough and he seemed like a massive creep. But if shock and controversy was what you were going for...gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-53390061889891115342012-05-29T13:41:42.464-04:002012-05-29T13:41:42.464-04:00Thank you for your feedback Angelica. I call them ...Thank you for your feedback Angelica. I call them restrooms. As for the incest, it was meant to repel.Leann Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-86410048203750136632012-05-29T13:38:52.095-04:002012-05-29T13:38:52.095-04:00Restroom seems the wrong word. It makes it sound l...Restroom seems the wrong word. It makes it sound like a public room rather than in a house. I'm not a fan of the incest either.Angelica Dawsonhttp://angelicadawson.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-46671220238180508342012-05-29T12:51:16.128-04:002012-05-29T12:51:16.128-04:00Wow...while I agree the content is questionable fo...Wow...while I agree the content is questionable for me - I can't argue with the fact that this piece truly gets to you. The imagery is amazing!Havanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06116528705614786647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3224773158615197452.post-82235088376316979092012-05-29T12:20:01.623-04:002012-05-29T12:20:01.623-04:00The imagery is intense, and the subject matter add...The imagery is intense, and the subject matter adds to the intensity. Very well written, LeannMolly Synthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869242353609554195noreply@blogger.com