Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Tantelizing Tuesday Teaser #6 - Portal to her Soul


It's time for more Tuesday Teasers! In case you're unaware, Tuesday is the day me and a bunch of other authors get to write a 200 word short on a picture of our choosing. When you're done reading my contribution check out what my fellow authors have to offer by following their links at the bottom of the page. Enjoy!

They say the eyes are the portal to your soul. What do you see when you look into my eyes? Look deeply and know my thoughts and my desires. Am I weak and easily taken advantage of? Am I strong and can get through any obstacle life throws in my way? Do you see pain or do you see triumph?
I see a woman begging to be touched delicately. Whose heart has been torn from her chest time and time again, yet survived. I see the desire to be truly loved and cherished, yet fear of allowing your heart to be vulnerable. I see pain and triumph both at the same time. There is no weakness in your soul, only want.
Yes, I want to be touched. I want to be loved and never hurt again. I want to be kissed passionately to the point of feeling fire shoot through my body. I want to know that I have my soul mate. The one I am to be with for the rest of eternity. I tire of playing games.
I love you.
Tell me again.
I love you.
I feel my heart melt when you speak those words. Fuck me.

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18 comments:

  1. Hmmm...yes, the eyes are a portal to the soul. Lovely work! :)

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  2. Great use of description loved it

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  3. Very emotional piece. Lovely tease.

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  4. Excellently written. Very emotional. Loved it

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    1. Thanks! I was hoping the narrative would work well!

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  5. Beautiful, your words match the picture so well!

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    1. Thanks Venus! A lot of my teasers reflect my emotions.

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  7. Lovely! I hope she found the right one this time. Beautiful picture.

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    1. Thank you Dianne. I hope she has too. :)

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  8. I like the way the emotional build up ends in raw need.

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    1. Thank you Lee! I thought it was a nice twist. :)

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