Friday, December 13, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday #14: The Rescue

Happy Friday everyone! It's Flash Fiction time! Some of my buds and I will be writing a 100 word flasher, inspired by one picture for all to read! Things could get interesting! After reading how the picture inspired me, stop by the other pages to read their take on it! Have fun! 






He knew the apartment well: Number 215; Claudette’s apartment. He braced himself before he went in. One. Two. Three. With that, he kicked the door in. Smoke billowed out of the apartment and engulfed him. Lowering his face, he ran in, looking all over the place for Claudette. He ran from room to room in search of the stripper he had fallen in love with and when he reached the bathroom, he had found her. She was laying unconscious on the floor, nothing on but her fishnet stockings. He lifted her off the floor and threw her over his shoulder.   


Click the links below to read more takes on this fantastic picture! Happy Blog Hopping!

J S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Doris O'Connor: http://thetardisscribbles.blogspot.co.uk/
Michaela Rhua http://michaelarhuaauthor.blogspot.co.uk

17 comments:

  1. fast paced flasher. Well written

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  2. Very fast paced, almost frantic, short. This emotion packed teaser was wonderfully built and finely executed, Leanne.

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    1. He did, and I am planning on extending it into my TTT. :)

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  4. your ending is a cliffhanger. Must know more :) Great flash

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    1. Thanks, Michelle! More will be coming this Tuesday! :)

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  5. And then? It's cruel to leave it there.

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    1. No it isn't, Raven. It's the rules. Only 100 words for Friday's teasers. Don't worry though, there will be more on Tuesday. :)

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  6. Great flash with a nice hint of romance to come, maybe

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    1. Thanks, Julez! Of course I have something more up my sleeve. ;)

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  7. You left me hanging? Does she survive and more important, where does his relationship go with her subsequently. You have a great story here.

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    1. Thanks, Pablo! Don't worry, I'll be adding more. You know I love my cliffhangers. :)

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  8. Great start of something you could easily develop. Super flash.

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    1. Thanks, Michaela! Just wait until Tuesday. :)

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  9. So tense and left me wanting to know more about both of them. Great flash.

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