Friday, May 25, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday #4 - The Blind Date

It's Flash Fiction Friday again. Let's see how this week's picture  has inspired the talented authors. In case you're unaware, we all have to write a 100 word short on the chosen picture for the week. We're not allowed to write any more or any less than 100 words. It isn't easy, but it's excellent exercise for our muses. When you're finished reading my little contribution, check out what the other talented authors have to offer through the links at the end of the page. Enjoy.

It was cold, wet, and the streetlights were too bright for her liking. It had been an awful night for Desiree Fontaine. Her best friend thought it would be a delightful idea to set her up on a blind date. She knew it was a bad idea, but Samantha wouldn’t take no for an answer.
Ryan was a complete jerk. He had been a total ass throughout the entire date and left Desiree to walk home alone, in the rain, after she shoved him off of her when he tried to dry hump her in the booth at the restaurant.
For more stories click on the links below.
Benjamin Russell: http://incubuschronicles.blogspot.com/
Patricia Logan http://naughtypassions.blogspot.com/?zx=d735233d541ad690
S. J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com 
Savannah Chase http://www.savannahchase.com/blog
Muffy WIlson: http://muffywilson.blogspot.com
ER Pierce: http://www.erpierce.com
Kendel Davi: http://kendeldavi.wordpress.com
Sherri Hayes: http://sherri-hayes.blogspot.com/
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
Cassandre Dayne: http://cassandredayne.wordpress.com/
Sherry Palmer: http://michellechatton.blogspot.ca/
CyrilJ. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.ca/
Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.ca/
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/

22 comments:

  1. Oh the dry humping made me laugh as I was having a conversation with a girlfriend about that very subject last night. A lovely piece!

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    1. That is hilarious! I am so glad you liked the flash!

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  2. what an idiot, dry humping on a blind date, that's totally a 2nd date thing :) Poor Desiree, what a sad night. But you Lean, super flash!!

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    1. Thank you S.J.! I am so glad you enjoyed it!

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  3. What an ass...Poor girl having to deal with that..Great FFF

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    1. Yes he was. I could have written so much more, but we can only write 100 words. I am glad you enjoyed the flash.

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  4. Oh, the gall...a dry hump at the restaurant?! I haven't had one of those in years. I had a bellyroll at that. Good for her, pushing him off cause it wasn't hon HER menu! Loved it/hate that she has to walk home alone. Great flash:) xo

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    1. I am glad it made you laugh. Thanks for the feedback! :)

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  5. Well, he tried to kiss her and she wouldn't give him any tongue, so else was left except a dry hump? Sadly, it wasn't totally dry because Ryan made a big wet mess in his shorts. Now we know why why he didn't mind letting her walk home alone, he got his. Leann, this is a wonderfully creative FFF, well done.

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    1. Thank you Benjamin. I appreciate your feedback! Your comment was hilarious!

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  6. Great story telling, idiot boy! Hopefully her friend will come and pick her up before she gets too wet! Great flash.

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    1. Thank you Gemma! I am glad you enjoyed the flash!

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  7. I could help but laugh. Dry humping just takes me back to high school days. Ryan was such as ass! Great Flash!

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    1. I thought the dry humping would add some humor to it. I am glad you enjoyed the flash!

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  8. Yep, the dry humping made me laugh too. Excellent post Leann. Loved what you did with the picture. And seriously.. what a douchbag. Letting her walk home alone, at night in the dark? What is wrong with him.

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    1. He's a dick and obviously part dog. Just kidding. I'm glad it made you laugh. Thank you for the feedback!

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  9. Been there done that! Fabulous Flasher. You had me giggling and snorting in disgust!

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    1. Thank you Venus! Glad you enjoyed the flash!

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  10. Thank you everyone for your comments! They were great and I'm glad I could make you all laugh! That is what I was going for. You all are wonderful!

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  11. What an arse. Loved the dry-hump, very clever.

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  12. That was funny and well written. She should have brought the creep with her and shoved him off the side of the pier or road, whichever it may be. Made me think of the Austin Powers moving I got dragged to once. The one where Mini Me dry humps Beyonce's leg. LOL Great job, sweety.

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  13. I agree with Kim. What an ass. She should have kicked his ass and driven his car home. great flasher.

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